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stuck again
stranded at home tonight
wish things could just be right
cant fix whats wrong
when i cant name the song

Im so bored of this
you cant even picture this
life is cruel to render this
still im lost finding this

my influence is next to me
omnipresent i cant see
my inspiration in front of me
yet lonely i still seem to be

my one love is many loves
the lack of love thats here
but so far away it appears
for nothing i shed my tears
but nothing is someone,
my fears.
©2003-2009 ~apavayne
:iconapavayne:

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another lonely weekend because i have no life

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:iconangelicrose:
wow this is so great. The rhyming really suits this....+fav for sure Nod

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:heart: Our hearts are drunk with a beauty our eyes could never see. :heart:
:iconrottedaspersions:
Strangely enough, a lot of rhyming poetry is rather annoying and... bad. But I must say, the rhyme goes really well in this, and I like it a lot.

+favs

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Spend some quality time with the demon of mine;
I like the way you struggle, but you know Im here to win.
Spend some quality time with my borrowed smile;
The gleam is replaced, rip me open and erase me
:iconbetexxxnoire:
Hmmm...it's blatantly clear that you are lonely...hurry and find someone to love and care for you the way you deserve!!! Depressed It makes me so sad...the last stanza is the best. Black Rose

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"Let it be."
:iconblue-skies:
This is deep. It is how i feel....

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I miss my icons.....
blegh...
:iconaztecrose:
you have no life, you wouldn't take the time to write this :) (Smile)
:iconschool:
Brilliant bro! We gotta collab sometime! :hug:s to you bro! :+favlove: I'm really :heart:ing this:!: :nod: :)

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May 25, 2003

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